Crit show 3: ( feedback from Paul and Gregg)

During a group crit a few issues with my work arrose, I am not sure weather these isusse where issues or they where just statements being raised to challenge. Of course anything said I have taken into consideration however the conversation did seem to spiral out of hand with multiple sugestion that did not for with the ideas and concepts I am working with.

The point was made that the piece was quite jokey and once you got past the initial home it fell a little flat. I agreed with this statement, whereas I did want the piece to be fun and  childlike to go along with my childhood memories of the paperclip, I am not sure that this novel approach is enough to create ongoing interest.



Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s

Create a website or blog at

Up ↑

%d bloggers like this: